This is a story about love, feelings and emotions. A try to wake people who are making themselves dead of emotions in this materialistic world. This is a story of pain and loss. This story can be related to one of the story I felt. But it’s a mixture of many stories together. The end is real and painful. I still feel for that poor girl I would only say, prey for her to give her strength in the real life war were she can fight against her past after reading this story.
This is a story of a boy who loves a girl very much for more than a year. Now he feels it’s the time to put forward his feeling in front of the girl. This girl works in a gift store and to put forward she is very beautiful. This is how it goes.
First Day In The Gift Shop With Intent:
A really handsome boy entered the gift shop with an air of nerve building inside him accompanied by a bulky boy with a look of intent and confidence in him. He grabbed the handsome boy by his shoulder and said, “Arun it is to be done today or it wont be possible ever”, with an encouraging smile on his face. Arun smiled back and nodded in answer. “Ok then common now”, the bulky boy said with an air of confidence that made Arun confident from within. “Hey Aakash thanks for the support you are providing me with”, Arun said with thankful look towards the bulky boy. The girl looked at them both approaching towards her counter and smiled at them. At that precise moment Arun lost his composure and balance too and slipped down on a glossy flooring, “Arun are you alright bro.” “Yeah I m fine, just lost my footings.”
Everybody was laughing at the scene. The girl at the counter was laughing too. It dint help to any extent on Arun’s confidence. He got up smiled at everybody and then walked towards the counter.
When he reached the counter the girl said, “I am sorry I never meant to laugh at you.” Arun said, “No no don’t be I am fine with it, atleast everybody laughed that does matter no matter what makes it funny. I m proud that it was because of me that everybody laughed and most importantly I made you laugh. No matter what it will take from me to make you laugh because, because……….” “Because what??”, girl asked with some sort of surpressed expression which no one could understand what it is. He took a deep breath for some hope that confidence will fill him up to say what he wanted to and with which intent he came to the shop. He said, “I always wanted to be a good friend with you”, in a single breath. Girl asked, “what I couldn’t get u there?” He repeated the sentence again and girl laughed and said, “that’s so sweet of you. Why were you so nervous to say this?” Akshay now came forward and stamped on Arun’s leg and said, “that’s how my friend is, shy right from the childhood never talk to the girl too much and now he is in love with a beautiful girl and he doesn’t know how to put forward the words and the girls name is, by the way what is your name?” Girl said, “my name is Sweety, but why?” “Oh very sweet name indeed, my friend will answer this question for you”. By that time Arun came back to normality with his foot still sore, Akshay said, “bro I m so sorry that I stamped on your foot is it all right now or is it still painful. I said her everything now it’s your turn to say it.” “What did you say her?” he caught Akshay’s collar and asked in his ears. “Nothing whatever I had to do I had done its now your turn to say.” “Ok now go off from here.” He turned back to the counter nervously with a shaky look, he reached the counter and tried to smile, he asked “what did my friend said to you? He is just a crazy guy he talks whatever he feels like when he sees a girl.” Girl said in a little low voice, “may be he was right this time.” “Ok then I come to the point I have come here to, to……..” Girl asks with some sign of interest, “to what now??” “I actually came here to take up some gifts for someone I love more than my life and I think after a month on Valentine’s Day I will come I mean go and give her telling my all feelings to her.” Girl asked with something in her eyes that Arun couldn’t catch, “why not do it today itself?” “No not today on Feb. 14th I want to make it special for both of us. Can I have some good presents give me whatever you think is the best and I will be here everyday till 14th is it ok.” “Its just gr8 for me”, girl said.
This went on till 13th of Feb.. On 14th Feb. the girl waited and waited hoping for him to come as if she knew she was the one whom he loved more than his life. She got disappointed at the end of the day and thought she was crazy to think that she was the one. Week went over and nobody came.
After a weeks time Akshay showed himself with a sad look on his face. She saw him and felt like going out of the counter and ask him why didn’t his friend came over for so many days. He was approaching towards her slowly as if some burden has been kept on him. He reached the desk and a tear rolled out of his eyes unknowingly. Sweety asked, “what happened, why r u crying, where is he, why didn’t he come over, whats the matter, why don’t you say anything, why r u making me feel so restless, say me whats the matter?” He said with a sore eyes, “He loved u very much, till the last time he took ur name.” “What do u mean by till last, what happened to him?” “He, he is no more.” This words were enough for her. Tears rolled over her eyes, she couldn’t stop herslf, she collapsed to ground in the grief. She composed herslf and asked him, “can u take me to his place?” “Yeah it was what he wanted at the last breath.” This made her eyes to run as if flood gates were opened.
They reached Arun’s home. Akshay said to Arun’s mother, “Aunty she is Sweety.” Aunty said, “Yes beta you can go in his room he wanted it to be done”, with a choked voice. She went into the room saw the gifts were never uncovered as if he wished it to be opened by his love. She picked one and saw the label, her name was written on it and was written I love U. She opened it and started crying without control over herself. She took one note from inside there it was written “Arun whether u say or not I know u love me and that girl is nobody but me.” He was a cancer patient which became apparent on the day of 14th Feb. when he was going to say her all about his feeling.
This is how it ends with both unable to say each how much they loved the other. Please prey for the girls who have lost their partners in this kind of unfortunate note for their strength to fight against the past of theirs.
6 comments:
Sad...doesn't this world have any happy endings???
I could sue you for this, you know!!
cruel world.......:X
:((
@};-
fr dem...
Well.. i cud see the Harry potter Hangover..Wangobalwimme[:p]./.. hehe....
and yea... the chat language..."prey".. i guess it was Pray .... and "
dint"[;)]
well.. that's all right...
I wanna tell u a story ......
It's a real life story ... of this author called soorya krishnamoorthy ....
well.. he once called a travel agency(or something lyk dat) to book a ticket to somewhere ....he told his name and date of teh trip... suddenly... this gal... talking over the phone.. was all... surprised and.. started saying things like..sir ..I am a great fan of urs and all.... and then started their friendship.... and days passed... and soorya started to call her ...not because of trips.. but just to talk to her... he started to send her gifts at the address of this agency ... and one day .. he asked her f he cud see her.. she said we'd see one day ... and she suggested.. since soorya's b'day is coming close .. she wanted to give him a gift.. he said.. okie. great ..we would meet....but one day before soorya's b'day she called him up and told him.. she had lost the keys of her drawer... where she had kept his gift.. he said its okie.... it must be somewhere there.. and if it doesn't open.. call a expert tomorrow.. some carpenter ... and he'd be able to break//open it.... and fix it too... but she hesitated and she said she wanted to give him the gift today .. she is not feeling well and all... and he asked her to take rest ..... and he made up his mind to go to the agency the next day ...when he reached there... she wasn't thre... But her friend told him that she .. who was suffering frm juvenile diabetes.. had died yesterday.. actually ..no one thought she would last this long.. pple with this disease usually succumb to death early in their lives... He asked her to give teh address of that gurl.. and she did.. he went there... and That girl's mom recognized him and... told her dead daughter..."see look who has coem to see u".."it'.s soorya sir.. ure soorya sir.. u wanted to meet him na?".."wake up".. said teh mother,,, soorya looked at the dead daughter... she was a young girl.. thin... cuz of her disease.... she barely looked as if she were ever alive..... soorya cud never believe .. it was that same chirpy girl.. he talked with....
he took ovr the cermony after that .. he took her to the cemetery .... and her mother... when the priest was closing the coffin.. said... Soorya sir will see her last ..... i think ..that wud make her happy.. where ever she is..."..
Now I am sayin that ki ye kahani padke mujhe is kisse ki yaad aagayi ......
wHOAAAAAA !!! Amazing.. this one gave me goosebumps...!!!
good job vix!!!
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